I liked the fact that as soon as I opened the page I saw a picture Diebler ballin' up a Nittany Lion. The only real criticism I'd have is that there was only one paragraph, but I prefer short and sweet because I have a short attention span. Well done. :D
This was a pretty good article and very short, sweet and to the point. You lay the facts out (which I did research and according to my sources you are correct) and don't try to add too much to it. I would mention more about what he accomplished in his career such as being the all time Big-Ten Three Point record setter, rather than saying he was the best because while he may of had more threes than anyone else, he also played more. If you go by threes per game, he wasn't the best. He also made more accomplishments that you could have added. All in all, you did a very good job.
I liked the fact that as soon as I opened the page I saw a picture Diebler ballin' up a Nittany Lion. The only real criticism I'd have is that there was only one paragraph, but I prefer short and sweet because I have a short attention span. Well done. :D
ReplyDeleteThis was a pretty good article and very short, sweet and to the point. You lay the facts out (which I did research and according to my sources you are correct) and don't try to add too much to it. I would mention more about what he accomplished in his career such as being the all time Big-Ten Three Point record setter, rather than saying he was the best because while he may of had more threes than anyone else, he also played more. If you go by threes per game, he wasn't the best. He also made more accomplishments that you could have added. All in all, you did a very good job.
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